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under toxic skies

chemtrails death planes darken day toxic trails threading through sky - plummeting poison chemwebs silver strands sparkle in crystalline canopies - chemical fallout Morgellons fibrils are prickling filaments sprouting through skin - torturous toxins

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  1. Date: 5/14/2013 8:43:00 PM

    I absolutely LUV Morgellons!!!! Wonderful use of words! I really luv it :) I luv it when writers step out of the box and find a WORD not just *skin or spike ect...* it made me feel scared and aware, just awesome!

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 6:05:00 PM

    I really like your writing, Charlotte. I'm going to set aside time to read more. I'll comment as I read. Jack

  1. Date: 1/16/2013 4:32:00 PM

    You are A WINNER with this Poem, and with the win of my heart! It is very delicate...So be Kind. About your comment on my poem...I deleted it ,cause i felt it needed work...you didn't say if you liked the rework? .

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:12:00 PM

    Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/25/2012 7:42:00 PM

    charlotte I am happy to see this on the winners list. Congrats to a very intelligent writer on Soup! Hope you had a lovely merry Christmas day.

  1. Date: 12/24/2012 7:36:00 AM

    Congrats, Char. Have yourself a wonderful Christmas!! Jag

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    Will respond with full message tommarow.s as you can imagine I'm having a great time with my niece and put a few presents under the tree with her name as the giving party.it warms my heart. Xoxox johnny
    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 12/24/2012 10:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Visiting sister below Lake Michigan in Indiana
    loving iii Avatar john loving iii Date: 12/24/2012 10:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes.I can't respond with mobile.no matter how hard I try.but this way good right through.
  1. Date: 12/24/2012 5:42:00 AM

    Good morning, Charlotte,, A nice warm congratulations in Susan's "any new 12 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Charlotte love xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:55:00 PM

    yes, I sent you soupmail. Let me try again.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 8:17:00 PM

    Aye, the damage we are doing is being rained down, literally, onto us. As harsh a write as it should be, but lovely all the same, real poetry. Sending you hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:23:00 AM

    People are toxic when they want to be. One is you and the other is me. A leathal poison that eats at thesoul. An unnourished curiosity about the goal.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:26:00 PM

    Toxins here, toxins there, very topical and nice. Anything new?!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:31:00 AM

    How can I say the news comming from over there... Kate this Kate that every fifteen minutes. I'm sick of it.

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:46:00 PM

    Love your free styling haiku....pd

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:45:00 AM

    Charlotte oohh I like this little trilogy of yours...David

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:03:00 AM

    great set of haikus here Charlotte..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:48:00 PM

    I can see we have a lot in common, thanks for your kind comments to my stuff

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:31:00 PM

    Not a bright outlook for a certain girl. I hope things are working for a cure. I hope you believe your just the girl.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:53:00 PM

    Yes even better, well done!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:29:00 PM

    great alliteration. I see you added to that first one. How is it going, Charlotte?