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The kick inside

you feel
like you felt back than 
that first mysterious 
soft and tender kick
was a foot, an elbow 
a knee or a heel

you can’t 
because 
it's not real
in your mind
until the second time

©Ellie Daphne van Stralen 

Under 15 lines 
Contest Judged:  12/9/2012 12:00:00 AM	
Sponsored by: SKAT- AB SIN THE-

	7	The kick inside	 by Ellie Daphne van Stralen

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  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:10:00 PM

    Beautiful verse,Ellie. Congratulations on your superb win in this contest...And thanks for stopping by and for your lovely comments on my poems...your are a darling..XOXO...

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:20:00 AM

    Congratulations Ellie love ,a well deserved win xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 4:46:00 AM

    congrads on this poem winning....

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/10/2012 4:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY TY TY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :-) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:51:00 PM

    Ellie, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/10/2012 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda. TY for .............. and these felicitations. :+) Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/10/2012 12:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My Monday-morning-mail-check-with-coffee Your message What a way to start this week... TY for all your time spent on the contest. I've been reading the winners-list and that really is the extra accolade to my 7th. Greetings from the Netherlands. :+) Ellie Daphne