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Fire and Ice

                                                    
                                                               
                                                                 
                                                                  
                                             The fire in your eyes means war
                                         Can’t stop it because I feel your anger
                                           I am just here sitting at the corner  
                                        Hoping the heat I created will disappear
                                                                   
                                         When I approached you after an hour
                                      The coldness in your heart begins to pour
                                             It’s like a brick of ice in the arctic
                                          You stared at me like a blank space
                                                                   
                                      Where do I stand if you put me to blame?
                                        Have mercy on me and please change 
                                         So that we can live a life with peace
                                 No fighting, no coldness but a pure happiness
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                                                     December 5, 20122
                                                      Maria Paz Samelo
                                 For Carol's Fire and Ice Free Poetry Contest
                                                      4th Place winner






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  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:26:00 AM

    Congratulations, Maria, on the win with this fine write!! Jag

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 5:03:00 AM

    Creative thinking for your entry in the contest..Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:55:00 AM

    Wow! this is another win my dear friend! I'm so happy for you! Big congratulations! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 1:24:00 AM

    Your very own 'Fire' and Ice"...... Felicitations. :-) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:43:00 PM

    Maria, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 5:04:00 PM

    congrats for the win, Maria. Good to see it got on the list!

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:54:00 PM

    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Maria. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:33:00 PM

    nice write Maria,best of luck,love the icicle shape lol

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/8/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Richard :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:25:00 PM

    love it! good luck in the contest! -JuliMichelle

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/8/2012 10:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Juli :)
  1. Date: 12/8/2012 1:20:00 PM

    I like your poem, good luck in the contest. Your profile picture is very cool!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/8/2012 10:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks again friend Richard :) Have a nice day!! its 12:37 pm here..goodnight :)
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/8/2012 10:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    you are very Beautiful and an excellent poet as well. Have a good night.
    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/8/2012 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much friend Richard..my picture was taken 4 years ago :) Good day!!
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 6:51:00 AM

    Hi, my dear friend! This is a very fantastic poem you've written! Two thumbs up again! I'm sorry I came late. I came here yesterday but I didn't stay long because I was not yet feeling well. Now, I am getting better but still I need to rest because of my cough. Huh! It's really humid and you know how allergic I am. Besides, flu again is an outbreak in school. Well, this is a well-written poem. Winner for sure. Good luck for a big win. Thank you for your nice comments. love always, LG

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/6/2012 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Get well soon dear Norie, thanks for your nice comments..I just stay at home and in the evening I went to the mall and eat alone then bought a 70% sale on food, vegetables, etc.. see you tomorrow :)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:32:00 AM

    You've conveyed Fire and Ice very well. Warm smiles, Connie

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/6/2012 7:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks so much dear Connie :)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:57:00 PM

    fire in the eyes and ice in the heart. NOT good to see that!! You addressed the theme well. I like the symbolic take on the contest!

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/5/2012 12:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much dear Andrea :) Have a blessed day always!! hugs
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:01:00 PM

    A very clever write you penned here Mara. Have a beautiful day. Love, Gail

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/5/2012 12:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks friend Gail, you are one of my inspiration here on PS :) God bless you always!! (^_^)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:52:00 AM

    Maria- wow straight fro the juggler..David

    Samelo Avatar Maria Paz Samelo Date: 12/5/2012 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much friend David :) have a blessed day always!!