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Father Tanka



                                                            He is my father
                                                        a very good provider
                                                         always gives advice
                                                   when life is in so much fright
                                                    I love him for his greatness







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  1. Date: 12/21/2012 9:47:00 PM

    Maria, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 12:26:00 PM

    Hi Maria,what a great tribute to your father, and a great write. Thank you for stopping by my write Maria, and commenting. Rollo

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 9:56:00 AM

    lovely and inspiring Maria..

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:01:00 AM

    An excellent tanka and dedication to one of the most precious gems in our lives my dear Mary! I extremely love and enjoyed it! It reminds me again of my dad :( still missing him so much especially this season. By the way, HAPPY FATHER'S DAY! How did you celebrate it yesterday? Here, we'd mass for the King but i went home and rest after ushering some visitors. Good luck and wish you all the best in the contest! love, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:54:00 PM

    how wonderful for you to have a father like this. Lovely!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Nice one Maria, we should always appreciate our parents xx