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alliteration medley

telling tendrils twine
a lovers loop of longing
until finally touching

a shimmering swine
swirling and slick
hard to get

a tangible tableau set with
tasty taters and tomaters
touching my tongue with a tang

belligerent battles belittle
brains badly, but burlesque
beauty is a buoyant business

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  1. Date: 12/20/2012 10:47:00 AM

    These are clever and each sets a lovely scene. like Harry says, must be hard to write but simple to read. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 10:30:00 AM

    not easy to write these, yet here i read a beauty, awesome...

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 5:13:00 PM

    nice write Raskin

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:47:00 AM

    I am not familiar with this style but your poem has intrigued me. Well written!

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 12:30:00 PM

    : ) Thanks for bringing a smile to my face with your "Alliteration Meley, Raskin...I truly enjoyed that! Thank you also for your kind comments on "Life is music and music never dies". Have a good weekend. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:41:00 AM

    Very entwined twindles that you have woven..Enjoyed reading the tongue twisters..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

    bobbins Avatar raskin bobbins Date: 12/12/2012 12:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Sara, your comments are always appreciated.