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Lights

Four candle flames were burning bright
While music softly played
I sat and made a nervous sight
Perhaps a bit afraid
But then she saw my nice surprise
And light lit up her eyes

~Written for Kindle the Lights contest~
~Non-premium member~

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  1. Date: 4/1/2013 12:32:00 AM

    Im rereading this beauty till you tickle our thoughts with a new poem.Tnks for reading my simple posts..much appreciated.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 7:59:00 AM

    I don't know how I missed this one before! Another romantic write by you! You have painted such a sweet picture here.

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:34:00 PM

    Just soft sweet and romantic..Somehow candles fascinate my senses as much as butterflies..Beautiful poem Mr I

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:16:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Isaiah. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 7:57:00 PM

    nice win~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:35:00 AM

    Goodmorning Isaih, Thanks so much for writing for my contest! Please do try my new contest if you need help with the new form just soup mail me & I will layout the line pattern for you. Congrad's on your winnning entry. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:06:00 AM

    Sweet and lovely little write, has a nice flow to it. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:40:00 AM

    Beautiful how your flame grew in this poem - could feel the blinking and the heat. Felicitations Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:52:00 AM

    Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:43:00 AM

    very nice poem indeed..congratulations on your win friend Isaiah. good day always!!

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:00:00 AM

    I like this piem Isaiah, congrts...Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/5/2012 1:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops cant type should read Poem..sorry
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:24:00 PM

    Congratulations on your awesome win, Isaiah! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:49:00 PM

    congrats Isaiah on a splendid write and win for lights theme luv ..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Isaiah, you have a romanic touch here, congrats on you win.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:45:00 PM

    Isaiah, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:47:00 AM

    Isaiah very sensuous.....David

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:33:00 AM

    Isaiah [wonderful biblical name there ;)] You did an EXCELLENT entry. When entering a contest, always list a Form [if you don't know you can do 1 or 2 things..simply label it Verse OR ask the Judge how to label it] for this one..the type of verse which I would say this is ..is Rhyme, so your form is Rhyme [bright/sight-played/ afraid- surprise/eyes] some of it is what is called half rhyme but it still is rhyme ;) Thank YOu for entering. Light & Love