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The Final letter

Dear Lover...

I struggle to gulp
the scorn you poured.
My mouth parched,
desperate for a sip of your love.
A taste of your lips.

Your engagement- an abomination.
Our relationship still floods
the plains of my memory.
Surges storming in my inner soul.
Questions bamboozle my mind.

So, your affection was a mere hoax.
I, the halloween freak?
Your tender touch, in fact a thump?
Our turgid, rose in bloom.
A flaccid, comatose weed?

I cherish our unending summertime. 
I crowned, knighted& sainted
your passion.
And you scorn me?
My Love, make no attempt to flee.
I will find you, her and your fragrant bliss.
A reeking carcass I will leave.

The pathetic yearning for the 
warmth of your suave flame,
Is dead.
And the need to draw blood,
Resides.

 ...with love, 
    
Your Real Bride.


For Dictionary fun...#1...Delilah`s words contest.

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  1. Date: 12/14/2012 10:31:00 PM

    This is ...AAh...better than an HM...Oh well...Ther's no accounting for taste eh? so go opinions.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:20:00 AM

    Congratulations on your HM Yvette love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:24:00 AM

    Beautiful write - heartbreakingly sad. I love how you've written it in letter form. And the way you've signed it 'your real bride'-thought provoking. Very well done Yvette!

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/10/2012 2:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks :)
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:45:00 PM

    Y Lisa, ... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/10/2012 2:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:35:00 PM

    Yvette, this is beautiful....always~PD

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:20:00 PM

    amazing write Yvette,,, congratulation for the contest...:) <3 SK

    Ndlovu Avatar Yvette Lisa Ndlovu Date: 12/4/2012 6:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much SK!