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Shelter in the Storm

                           Elements gone mad
            Wind shrieks, rain pounds, thunder roars
                         Your arms- my shelter



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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:33:00 PM

    Nice haiku - love the third line

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 12/6/2012 12:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Colin. I feel safe in my husband's arms....he just doesn't hug me enough! ;)
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 2:40:00 PM

    good to be in the arms of the man you love...pd

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 12/5/2012 5:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your post! Yes, it is very reassuring! :)
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 10:21:00 PM

    Hi Eileen, this is a really great Haiku, with great imagery. Rollo

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 12/3/2012 11:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Rollo! What a wonderful post! I appreciate it so much! :) Have a great evening! Hugs from Beirut.