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The babbling brook

clearest water flows gently
along and over my naked feet
the touch of its  almost tacit sound 
deafening beauty for a  calming mind
thousands of tiny goosebumps 
showing the numerous  surprising shivers  
trying  to make sense  

the softest sofa  of fresh leaves and little twigs
spread a narcotic palette of autumn perfumes
coloring the signals of my soul

a generous friendly fire of chestnuts and acorns
compose a  beat and feel  of rhythm of the forests
tapping on my shoulder and head
changing every breath that I take
while softly knocking
at future’s door


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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Hi Ellie love the autumal feel to this write very descriptive, all the best Owen

    Daphne Avatar Ellie Daphne Date: 12/4/2012 1:00:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY Always a pleasure when someone actually TELLS you reading a poem was a pleasure and why! :+) Ellie Daphne