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Picking Flowers

In the fields as she picks flowers
Beauty compounds within the scene
She holds them hearing their powers
In the fields she picks her flowers
They never did seem at all sour
Her soul holds them dear as she’s seen
In the fields as she picks flowers
Beauty compounds within the scene

Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:54:00 AM

    You really do all the forms extremely well Russell..and this is a wonderful triolet...i can see the scene..its so vivid..your poetry is vivdly descriptive..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:48:00 PM

    NIce, Russell. Keep that poetry flowing!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 5:05:00 PM

    ah yes perspective grows the loved one shows, the flowers, those, that we can surely see:)

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 3:02:00 PM

    lovely write indeed, my friend - a tricky form, I find, but you make it look easy