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Fire Rises

Her hands cold like ice
Release my desire
My passion growing
Burning like a fire

Tearing of fabric
Our bodies exposed
Feeling tingling
As passion explodes

Bodies entangled
Joined in every way
Rising and falling
Two lovers at play

Minutes become hours
Desire becomes quenched
Refreshed exhausted
Bodies fully drenched


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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM

    Poet, you surely are like me, but thats just part of the loving see, passion might just send ya blind, but who cares come back baby mine, serendipity....?

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/4/2012 5:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Don, Keep on smilen buddy!
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:19:00 PM

    Hi Richard like this paaionate write don't know about minutes into hours, i,ll settle for seconds into minutes haha, all the best Owen

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2012 2:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Good one Owen! I like your sense of humor.
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:02:00 PM

    ! A TAD BIT TO RUFF FOR MY OWN TASTE, BUT, I DO HAVE MY PASSION BURNING, NAILS PENETRATING, TO PIERCE HER LOVE'S, DEEPEST DESIRABLE, MOMENTS, LOL. GOOD MORNING DEAR PRECIOUS RICHIE. I LOVE YOUR PASSION HERE AND IT SOUNDS AS THOUGH YOU HUNGRY HEART ENDED UP WITH MORE THAN ENOUGH TO SATISFY, YOUR NEEDS ? RTHANKS FOR THE KIND VISIT; WONDERFUL. "HAPPY HOLIDAYS." LOVE ALWAYS, RACHEL *

    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/3/2012 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I decided to take a page from your book. Thanks for your visit. Hopefuly not to risque.