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Duty of Being Human

I don't show it, but sometimes,
I slip into the serene sanctuary
of a sound slumber, and I arrive
in dream with feet rooted in 
the peak of a hilltop that
overlooks the masked shadow of 
human nature, and allows me sight
into the depth of a spirit.

It is here, on this brink
of my softest sense,
I rediscover the cycle of
what breathes and lives
And detach my existence
from the restraints of 
a myopic perspective.
Using what crumbles away
of my former perception
as means to remedy the
illness of possessing an ego,
I search.

And, I find truth.

I find truth in the significance
of being insignificant by a closer
comparison to trees, insects, and 
water.
And my head descends in shame
from vice of mistaking 
point of view for purpose.
For the world moves while I
stand frozen on this hilltop,
And these bugs I squash,
trees I ignore, and water I waste
do more for this existence than I.

And of all connections inherited
from birth, I find mine to the
"Unappreciated" teaches lesson
on the tipping scale of life.
It is on this thought, I dwell
until I free my feet by waking.
Waking to a comprehension of
connection that surpasses 
the fallible understandings 
I once clenched as fact.

And through the clarity,
I embrace this humbling fact:

If I am nothing for my lack
of contribution to life while living, 
then, without a moral mind and
kind heart offered to my fellow 
beings,
I do nothing for the greater good
until I die and become sustenance
that lives in the earth.
Should I ignore this truth and
indulge in a selfish survival,
What "good" am I now?

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:38:00 PM

    I know I over say this but seriously... WOW!! I cant fathom how you spill out words as perfectly as you do... This is amazing. I love the entire concept. It's so true that sweet Mother Nature is always providing for us... Yet we as ego minded humans can tend to fail to provide for her, or at least fully appreciate her... Adding another AMAZING poem to my favorites :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:14:00 PM

    It is very nice to see your name here on the soup... by the way who said human was being easy... enjoyed..pd

    Taylor Avatar Audonus Taylor Date: 12/4/2012 11:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    P.D! Long time no hear/read! It is good to be back on the Soup. I'll be on and off, but I will catch up with your work when I can! That's a promise. You'll soon see that I have been a very busy young writer lol. Thanks for stopping by!