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  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:05:00 PM

    to-bad I missed the free verse haiku. I can not feel this poem. Still I have enjoyed following your poetry today. Sorry for the honesty, the ending is plain. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:37:00 PM

    maybe [one feeble cricket/absorning the last bit of light--silence] then you have subject line 1 action line two SURPRISE [no churp because he's feeble...] line 3 Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:28:00 AM

    I really like this, I would say it is haiku, the sort of free style haiku I like :-)

    A  Avatar SKAT A Date: 12/4/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Charlotte, i wish i had gotten to read the free verse haiku
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:26:00 AM

    amazing ..thank you for sharing your nice work...<3 SK