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Alone Now

alone now.  swaying
shadow on the ground too crooked
for the sawmill










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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 12:39:00 PM

    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this afternoon Johnny. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:09:00 PM

    Johnny, , stopping by 2 welcome U into the soup. First I will start by reading your haiku. love the image. Good haiku if you ask me. Wishing you the best success with your poetry. ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:55:00 PM

    Great job great haiku!!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:15:00 PM

    Very good haiku, Johnny. - // Anne-Lise :)

    Barfield Avatar Johnny Barfield Date: 12/2/2012 1:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you, it's my first one.