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About This Poem

Shimmering Fire and Ice

Just over the hill
Beyond the slick black asphalt
misty rain blankets
Cascading through soft sunrays
Shimmering like fire and ice
~*~

Annalise Brigham 12/02/12
For Carol's "Fire and Ice Contest

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    Lucilla Carrillo
    Date: 12/5/2012 10:09:00 PM
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    This is good. I wish you luck in the contest. Lucilla
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/3/2012 7:18:00 PM
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    I just love the imagery you used for this tanka. VEry nice!!
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    jack horne
    Date: 12/3/2012 3:12:00 PM
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    lovely tanka, Annalise
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 12/3/2012 7:46:00 AM
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    What a pretty picture you have painted. Good luck in contest.
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    Barbara Gorelick
    Date: 12/3/2012 7:17:00 AM
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    Beautiful...BG
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 12/2/2012 5:57:00 PM
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    Excellent entry my sweet poet friend. Very enjoyed. Michael
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 12/2/2012 5:02:00 PM
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    ‡ Ps., Happyyyy Birthdayyyy To Youuuu, Happyyyy Birthdayyyy To Youuuu, Happy Birthdayyyy, 'Beautiful Annalise,' Happyyyy Birthdayyyy, Toooo, Youuuu, And Many More! LOL, You Beauty Knows, That My Heart Had To Come And Sing A Birthday Song Unto Your Beautiful Treasures ˜ Thank You For Allowing Myself To Know In Your Majestic Lights Lovely Visit, So That I Could. I Hope That It Has Been A Perfectly Glorious Birthday For Your Beauty ˜ Sweet Kisses, And, May All Your Wishes Come True! 'Have A Beautiful Evening.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

    Brigham Avatar Annalise Brigham Date: 12/3/2012 8:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    : )Thanks for the warm wishes, Rachel! You have a kind heart. God bless. Love, Annalise
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    frank herrera
    Date: 12/2/2012 4:32:00 PM
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    OOH!!!Gorgeous!! Fascinating visual! A sure WINNER! And might i add>>>Your avatar screams out at me..."I"M GORGEOUS TOO! I'm very excited to have met you! Have seen your lovely Avatar floating around here looking to land upon my beauty distinguishing eye.
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/2/2012 2:03:00 PM
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    an impressive portrait with immense imagery Annalise .. winning wishes for contest theme .. hope u r doing fantastic .. we r all blessed and loving ..
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2012 1:18:00 PM
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    A beautiful way to describe it Annalise - wish you luck in the contest. - Hope the first week of December will bring out some Christmas cheer :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Catie Lindsey
    Date: 12/2/2012 12:39:00 PM
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    very nice, not what i expected when i read the title. i thought it would be another poem about diamonds. But I like yours better. best wishes in the contest. hugs, Catie :)
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    Rachel St.Cross
    Date: 12/2/2012 12:08:00 PM
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    ‡ Tis Somewhat Enchanting Once Stepping Into The Soft Cascading Sunlight, Sweet Beautiful Annalise! Sparkling Emotions In Shimmering Diamonds As That, 'Fire & Ice' ˜ Yet This These Would Surely Seem Not The Only Of Such, When Viewing Your Radiant, Glittering Beauty! Wonderful Painting And Even More This, Finding Your Treasures, Here At PoetrySoup Today; Sooo Beautiful! 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *


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