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The Echoes of Afar Distinct Soul

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The Echoes of Afar Distinct Soul

A friend cast to the land of a distinct
Frigid base, she said...
Lonesome embraced the yearn, mum likewise
Forfeit the identity, stumbled to the pivot of stir

A missed scraped of self-consciousness
The alert of all mistaken
Failed which taken about the half year of a time
Still another year kindly to visit

Await is the other chapter of her book which filled by the tears and sweats

Those eyes desiccated
Fagged had spun for the still
Tiring had mourned upon her fool
If only the existence able to teleport or be returned

Indeed I knew
Thou heart rooted within
Seeks the pedestal of berth and backrest for a lean
Fell into a soot of mother-earth and longing for the creatures which stood upon

Once thou reborn
Morphed into the maturer form
And when the time has come
Every single cells of glory threw pride upon sun

For the down valley beneath her soul taught the life lessons
Afar from a distinct revealed the pavement of her inner soul
Nevertheless frigid base undertaken the coral of her blizzard

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  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:43:00 AM

    You write so well my dear Yanny! I love every line in your poem and they are all wonderful. This is a winner for me. I'll read more of your poems next time because it's too late here. Good night! love and hugs, Leonora

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 9:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Same here, it's midnight already, lol :D, thank you for checking out my page Leonora,glad to have you here
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 11:38:00 AM

    My friend Yanny, you are really very clever. - I admire this poem! - I'm crossing all my fingers for YOU to win this contest! - Have a great new week. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 9:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, it's a big support from you and I am really happy to have those comment by you :D
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 11:18:00 AM

    I am always mesmorized by your words. You use them in ways I would never consider. I find your interpretation of the language to be refreshing and innocent. Child like wonder with a woman's sensibility and maturity.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 10:01:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    I tried my best Richard :D but still yours are the most adorable :)
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 11:12:00 AM

    Yanny Please remind me which poem you wanted me to re-read hon..HUGS! Then I will for sure go do it! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 9:08:00 AM

    Such wonderful words flow across my screen. You are a beautiful Poet inside and out... hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko
    Date: 12/3/2012 10:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Michael, your comments always refreshing :D, Your encouragement made me feel more comfort and motivated in writing, glad to have you here :D