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Shipwreck

The able gave it a generously long wink

as if they did not think

resulting in the captain`s sharp stink

While down went the clueless ship

with the rich captain`s poor sheep

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:03:00 AM

    Soup mail

    Sibanda Avatar Ndaba Sibanda Date: 12/12/2012 2:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    "Soup mail". At first those two words did not make sense to me. However, it did not take me time to realise that the above piece has very little, if at all, to do with the terzanelle form. Now please help me welcome....The Victim In Disguise!