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Yesha Shah
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Mountain slopes
over mountain slopes.. mingling with my tears a soft rain Yesha Shah
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Frank Polgar
Date: 1/21/2013 6:59:00 PM
Another excellent haiku!
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/6/2013 6:07:00 PM
yup that's a haiku ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
kash poet
Date: 12/27/2012 5:48:00 AM
a BIG congrats on your 1st place win with this gem Yesha!!You should try more haiku.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/25/2012 7:31:00 PM
as beautiful as ever! congrats on the win.
James Nichols
Date: 12/24/2012 11:52:00 AM
congratulations. lots of emotion in few words, which is very hard to convey. Excellent work.
Heather Ober
Date: 12/24/2012 8:07:00 AM
Congrats on an awesome win! :)
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/24/2012 5:37:00 AM
Good morning, Yesha,, A nice warm congratulations in Susan's "any new 12 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
Jon A Cavanaugh
Date: 12/23/2012 5:25:00 PM
Kem cho! Congratulations on your great win Yesha
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/23/2012 1:29:00 PM
fantastic haiku and big congrats Yesha love xx
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/3/2012 8:43:00 PM
Yesha, a very sad image... enjoying this haiku... xox~pd
Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/3/2012 7:19:00 AM
I hope not tears of sorrow but of joy..Enjoyed reading your Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
Ahsan Khalid
Date: 12/3/2012 2:23:00 AM
a very cute little poem very beautiful and meaning full
yasmin khan
Date: 12/3/2012 1:08:00 AM
simply heart rending Yeshooo, so are you going to teach me gujarathi words, i got many gujjus in my tower,.. You write wonderful haiku my dear Yesha..I think the vacation really relaxed you...how are the kiddies.
Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
wow, so lovely and sad, Yesha. Keep writing ones like these, but they can also be happy!
jack horne
Date: 12/2/2012 10:11:00 AM
lovely haiku, Yesha - and what a sweet pic of you and your family
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 12/2/2012 7:56:00 AM
Wow these words jump out and land right in my hand.. You have created such beautiful poem... LOVE IT!!! hugs Michael
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/2/2012 7:51:00 AM
a sensitive piece emoting in unison with the slopes slippery and cold yet beautiful Yesha .. hope u will visit my hometown one day .. but Italy is beyond beautiful too luv ..
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 12/2/2012 7:16:00 AM
Sad but very good haiku, Yesha - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jack Ellison
Date: 12/2/2012 4:46:00 AM
So so sad but beautifully expressed my dear Yesha! Love and happy thoughts, Jack xox
kash poet
Date: 12/2/2012 4:37:00 AM
Is it for any contest?
Yesha Shah
Date: 12/3/2012 7:34:00 AM
yeh ads mere haiku par chadh jaati hai, bechara dikh hi nahi raha tha, toh enter maar kar naam likha, ok?
kash poet
Date: 12/2/2012 6:39:00 AM
To naam kiun likha hai niche.....
Yesha Shah
Date: 12/2/2012 6:36:00 AM
No, I dnt think there is any such contest where in I could enter this haiku.
kash poet
Date: 12/2/2012 4:36:00 AM
Beautiful haiku here Yesha!Though sad one ,I like it.
Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 12/2/2012 4:29:00 AM
oh this is sad but I just love it. Thanks for all your comments Yesha
