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Mountain slopes





over mountain slopes..
mingling with my tears
a soft rain









Yesha Shah

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    Frank Polgar
    Date: 1/21/2013 6:59:00 PM
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    Another excellent haiku!
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    Debbie Guzzi
    Date: 1/6/2013 6:07:00 PM
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    yup that's a haiku ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/27/2012 5:48:00 AM
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    a BIG congrats on your 1st place win with this gem Yesha!!You should try more haiku.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/25/2012 7:31:00 PM
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    as beautiful as ever! congrats on the win.
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    James Nichols
    Date: 12/24/2012 11:52:00 AM
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    congratulations. lots of emotion in few words, which is very hard to convey. Excellent work.
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    Heather Ober
    Date: 12/24/2012 8:07:00 AM
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    Congrats on an awesome win! :)
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/24/2012 5:37:00 AM
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    Good morning, Yesha,, A nice warm congratulations in Susan's "any new 12 Line Poem" Wishing you the best holidays to come. Merry Christmas and a happy new year. Love~LINDA
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    Jon A Cavanaugh
    Date: 12/23/2012 5:25:00 PM
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    Kem cho! Congratulations on your great win Yesha
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/23/2012 1:29:00 PM
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    fantastic haiku and big congrats Yesha love xx
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    Poet Destroyer A
    Date: 12/3/2012 8:43:00 PM
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    Yesha, a very sad image... enjoying this haiku... xox~pd
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 12/3/2012 7:19:00 AM
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    I hope not tears of sorrow but of joy..Enjoyed reading your Haiku..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
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    Ahsan Khalid
    Date: 12/3/2012 2:23:00 AM
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    a very cute little poem very beautiful and meaning full
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    yasmin khan
    Date: 12/3/2012 1:08:00 AM
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    simply heart rending Yeshooo, so are you going to teach me gujarathi words, i got many gujjus in my tower,.. You write wonderful haiku my dear Yesha..I think the vacation really relaxed you...how are the kiddies.
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 12/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    wow, so lovely and sad, Yesha. Keep writing ones like these, but they can also be happy!
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    jack horne
    Date: 12/2/2012 10:11:00 AM
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    lovely haiku, Yesha - and what a sweet pic of you and your family
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 12/2/2012 7:56:00 AM
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    Wow these words jump out and land right in my hand.. You have created such beautiful poem... LOVE IT!!! hugs Michael
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 12/2/2012 7:51:00 AM
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    a sensitive piece emoting in unison with the slopes slippery and cold yet beautiful Yesha .. hope u will visit my hometown one day .. but Italy is beyond beautiful too luv ..
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 12/2/2012 7:16:00 AM
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    Sad but very good haiku, Yesha - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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    Jack Ellison
    Date: 12/2/2012 4:46:00 AM
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    So so sad but beautifully expressed my dear Yesha! Love and happy thoughts, Jack xox
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/2/2012 4:37:00 AM
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    Is it for any contest?

    Shah Avatar Yesha Shah Date: 12/3/2012 7:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeh ads mere haiku par chadh jaati hai, bechara dikh hi nahi raha tha, toh enter maar kar naam likha, ok?
    poet Avatar kash poet Date: 12/2/2012 6:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    To naam kiun likha hai niche.....
    Shah Avatar Yesha Shah Date: 12/2/2012 6:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    No, I dnt think there is any such contest where in I could enter this haiku.
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    kash poet
    Date: 12/2/2012 4:36:00 AM
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    Beautiful haiku here Yesha!Though sad one ,I like it.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 12/2/2012 4:29:00 AM
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    oh this is sad but I just love it. Thanks for all your comments Yesha