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The Ongoing Block

Despite a gravitational proclivity
And atmospheric tranquility 
My stifled creativity
A lesson in humility



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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:37:00 AM

    Great rhyme scheme with an inspiring message! S'very, very cold here Joe, if you've a spare 'block' heater', me and me muse would feel much obliged borrowing it? Hitching blocks, creative block, road blocks wooden cubes and building blocks. No wonder why I don't comment so often, I start to fly off the handle after a few..COMMENTS!!:) Keep writing Joe, you've a wonderful gift to share! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:42:00 PM

    Amen and do I hear YOU LOL Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:42:00 AM

    A very interestig block...They are nasty aren't they?

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:17:00 PM

    This is fantastic Joe! I have never seen writers block expressed with such clarity. Way to go Joe!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Joe, loved your rhyme, Oh, I know that place, well done. Constance

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 9:34:00 AM

    I love this poem. When a poet can capture a big image with little amount of words, I am always impressed!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 4:01:00 AM

    Nice one - I've been here.. ;) By the way, thank you for your nice comment on my poem Without a Song. It's encouraging to me when someone "gets" it, when it comes to my poems ;) I'm looking forward to reading more of yours. Take care.