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A Flame Once Burned

A flame once burned so brightly everything in sight seemed quite beautiful in its blinding light. Everything I took for truth once upon a time seemed to me more glorious; love seemed more sublime. Then the fire began to die. Every little flaw I began to clearly see till I’d seen it all. Half a lifetime and the flame still is burning out. As it dims, I am learning what life is about. But the happy medium I had come upon soon will flicker less and less. Going….. Going…. Gone. When my flame goes nearly out, will there come a pall? In the darkness that will come - will I see at all? Oh, for precious days of yore - passion of my youth - when a flame once burned, and I thought I knew of truth. Trying this in Skat's "any poem under 15 lines" Poetry Contest

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  1. Date: 12/25/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Andrea, I admire your poem so much that I have placed it on my Face Book for my friends to read and admire. Visit my Face Book and see for yourself. Love. _Mohammad.

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:46:00 PM

    Wow, wonderful poem. Great win. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:09:00 PM

    Wonderful poem and win Andrea! Hugs

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:38:00 PM

    andrea, I've been meaning to stop by for days and now that I have I've discovered this lovely poem and I see it won 1st place, congrats! :-)

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:41:00 AM

    Big Congratulations my friend Andrea... its' indeed a winner!! Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 6:52:00 AM

    An yes, you will see in the darkness, Andie...your inner- light will shine and show the way back home...beautifully done and congrats to you my good friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 5:24:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning place again Andy love xx

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 12:12:00 AM

    Andrea I LOVE the way you describe detailed the effect of that little great flame into a great little flame............. It is visible - the downsizing of that flame. Felicitations - Felicitations :+) Ellie Daphne

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Awesome win!!! I LOVE the last two lines.

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:45:00 PM

    Andrea, congratulations with your awesome poem. Hope your enjoying this heat... or is it only hot down here in the lower part of Texas... always~ PD

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:36:00 PM

    congrats on your win Andrea

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:31:00 PM

    Strong verbage in the "going going gone line"---great tone and couplets...congrats young lady!! :) What a blast!!

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 2:23:00 PM

    Congrats in my contest, Andrea. ~SKAT

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:48:00 PM

    I love this poem Andrea. A fantastic write. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:13:00 PM

    Awesome really must commend you for a job well! hope reading more of your superb------------KELECHI

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:33:00 PM

    Andrea your tree sounds so gorgeous .. luv the color combo .. our new windows will be installed tomorrow ..then we can finish decorating .. btw .. I had to redo my fav poet list as it was deleted last time I left PS so u r back on again luv..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:50:00 PM

    Great work for Gail's contest..I especially like the like stanza..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifiting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:25:00 PM

    Well Done. Flawless flow, wonderful story. Going going gone great finish to the rhyme

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 10:28:00 AM

    Lol:-) You`re clicking too fast!! haha,you haven`t read my last two poems?? Luuuv Ya`:-)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 6:41:00 AM

    Wooooooooow! Love this Andrea!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Wow! Great introspection.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:19:00 AM

    Quite cool realization of youth life. Be young always, keep mind young always because body is born and dies. You always keep your words of finest sense in depth. Good luck. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 4:25:00 AM

    As consistantly inspiring and polished , as ever AD . Hope the world is good with you and thanks for stopping by. Sean .

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:10:00 AM

    its the bestest of the best..how do you write such wonderful poetry Andrea..lovely thoughts from a lovely you...Joe and you are always in my prayers my dear Andrea..don't you worry about anything...

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 8:12:00 PM

    The transition in this is excellent. I usually can't read anything longer than a few lines, but no trouble here because it rings home. The last line is so true. You have wisdom. Thanks for your comments.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 3:16:00 PM

    The absolute of yesterday was bound to end up a little gray. A lesson learned from the flame that once burned. Wonderful write Adrea. I like your humanity. :)

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:37:00 PM

    Oh my..you precious Lady:) You`re on top of the game with this beautiful poem.The emotions you put in it is pure and amazing.Love it!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:12:00 PM

    amazing what comes out of the embers of the flame... i just read one....

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 1:26:00 PM

    this was beautiful.. I have yet to master this form.. You did a great job with it.. Hope all is well.. Have a great day cory

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:23:00 PM

    This is awesome (I once read that Awesome wasn't a good word for praise) but i love to use it when i'm clearly moved. i'm not only moved by the subject...but by the skill you use here to deliver it with such impact...but then ...that's the sweetness of poetry isn't it? the 'Gift' you have...that sets u above so many here...

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