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Haunted Spell-Questionku







                                               Realm souls stray roam
                                           Grieved hum shattered odd
                                              How's life before I leave?






Author's Note:
This haiku is inspired by the game that I played, it's about some mystery cases and the haiku is telling about a spirit which still wander around with its unfinished business. I just want to try a different sense and  color besides beauty or sublimity of haiku, hopefully you've enjoyed and got your goosebumps on it :D


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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:58:00 AM

    SO SO Good!!! you have a penned a winner.... Hugs Michael

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/2/2012 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Michael, glad for having support by you too :D
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 11:51:00 AM

    Wow!Good one.Will do good in the contest.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 12/1/2012 5:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kash your comment is really uplifting :D