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STRANGER

he knocks at the majestic door broke her crystal heart and left her with splinters she shuts the door for life no gliding for love living to mend the pieces

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  1. Date: 12/24/2012 8:08:00 PM

    Angel, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 12/25/2012 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda... Love... Angel
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 11:30:00 PM

    Hey Angel, this is great! You've tackled the issue of a broken heart well. People should beware of strangers because friends do not treat each other like that. Well penned!

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 12/23/2012 8:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Vicky... Love... Angel
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:25:00 AM

    Lovely write!

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 12/23/2012 8:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Modupe Omo Oodua. Love... Angel
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:50:00 AM

    Angel, by your picture you appear very young, yet you write with much wisdom. By the way, did you mean stranger with your title? Or is stanger a name for someone?

    Simon Avatar Angel Simon Date: 12/1/2012 1:02:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Andrea... Ooops! I mean Stranger... I'v corrected it. Strangers come to exploit the emotion, and leave the partner in emotional tussle... Love... Angel