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looser

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looser

tried 
so 
very
hard
(really
one
watching
objectively
from
the
sidelines
might
have
said
that
s/he
was 
trying
to
hard
in
fact)
to
be
something
that
s/he
was 
not,
by
sucking
up
&
sucking
off
the 
man
in
order
to 
be
loved
by
the
mass,
in
order
to 
be
“the
next
big
thing,”
in
order
to
be
cared
about,
when
all 
along
the
way
s/he
lost
more
&
more
of
him/herself
in
the
doing,
until
one
day
s/he
said
****
it
to
everything 
&
suddenly
in 
the
ceasing
of
all
giving
a
shit,
his/her
art
was
oh
so
much
better,
his/her
sleep
was
so
much
more
satisfying,
the
food
even
had
a
better
taste
&
all
began
to 
come
easier
with
a smooth
flow.

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 3:25:00 AM
    Interesting...what a unique style.