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Carma Reed
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His big brown eyes-- --linger in A distance... I Smile back at him.
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Wendia Rowe
Date: 1/6/2013 2:56:00 PM
You know the funny thing is when i clicked on this poem and read it,I smiled as i envisioned myself @ 15 and fell in love with a brown eyed guy, that's exactly how I felt. And the poem gives off that sudden feeling of spring then it just flies passed so short and sweet,those 3 lines. I think I'm gonna write about him,lol. I am inspired.
Carma Reed
Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 PM
Keep smiling Wendia, love making ppl smile, and inspiration, is what I love too see, and I can't wait to read about your him lol love always my dear poet..
Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/5/2012 8:52:00 PM
Hello, Carma I imagine this guy smiling at you,,, weee...I know the feeling when a guy smiles at me.. I look right back and add a blink to that smile I'm sending him... love this ku...pd
Carma Reed
Date: 12/5/2012 11:35:00 PM
Hi PD I know he is, for sure I am that LUCKY GIRL in his eye...
Ahsan Khalid
Date: 12/3/2012 2:24:00 AM
hehe this is sweet
Carma Reed
Date: 12/3/2012 2:58:00 PM
Haha!! Thank You Ahsan
POETESS DARKLY
Date: 12/2/2012 7:37:00 PM
this is so sweet
Carma Reed
Date: 12/3/2012 2:58:00 PM
Thank You Linda
Rachel St.Cross
Date: 12/1/2012 2:39:00 PM
‡ Makes Me Think Of The Movie, The Terminator,' With Kyle's One And Only Photo Of His Heart's Love, Sarah, Throughout Shiftings Time, Sweet Beautiful Carmen. Always Pulling It Out To Gaze Upon Her, Yet, Never Truly Knowing Perhaps As Unto Why ? But John Conner Knew, That His Father As His Mother Were Destined, To Help Change The Course Amid The Afore Mentioned, Time ? Written In The Stars, These Parallels That We Are ˜ Quite Beautiful Your Poe And Your Smile! Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. 'Happy Holidays.' Love Always, Me *
Carma Reed
Date: 12/1/2012 3:45:00 PM
Love the imagery here of your kind words, I love that movie, it's a classic of true love. Love always Carma
Toquyen Harrell
Date: 12/1/2012 2:10:00 PM
Carma, are you giving somebody the eye? Lol. Nice one. Love ya, Toquyen
Carma Reed
Date: 12/1/2012 3:36:00 PM
Thanks Toquyen ,LOL u found me out lol
Dan Kearley
Date: 11/30/2012 7:58:00 PM
Very nice Haiku Carma... :o)
Carma Reed
Date: 12/1/2012 7:09:00 AM
Thank you much my dear friend Dan, enjoy ur stuff too!! Xoxo Carma
Rollo West
Date: 11/30/2012 5:32:00 PM
Really good Carma, great imagery. Rollo
Carma Reed
Date: 12/1/2012 7:08:00 AM
Thanks much Rollo, hope the image was great lol
Anne Lise Andresen
Date: 11/30/2012 5:05:00 PM
It was tricked ..... I had done the same thing ... lol ... Very good haiku Carma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Carma Reed
Date: 12/1/2012 7:07:00 AM
A fates twist... Lol thank you much Anna-Lise enjoyed yours as well, smile big, :) have a wonderful Saturday xoxo Carma