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Smile

          




                                        His big brown eyes--
                                        --linger in A distance...
                                    I Smile back at him.

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  1. Date: 1/6/2013 2:56:00 PM

    You know the funny thing is when i clicked on this poem and read it,I smiled as i envisioned myself @ 15 and fell in love with a brown eyed guy, that's exactly how I felt. And the poem gives off that sudden feeling of spring then it just flies passed so short and sweet,those 3 lines. I think I'm gonna write about him,lol. I am inspired.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 1/15/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Keep smiling Wendia, love making ppl smile, and inspiration, is what I love too see, and I can't wait to read about your him lol love always my dear poet..
  1. Date: 12/5/2012 8:52:00 PM

    Hello, Carma I imagine this guy smiling at you,,, weee...I know the feeling when a guy smiles at me.. I look right back and add a blink to that smile I'm sending him... love this ku...pd

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/5/2012 11:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi PD I know he is, for sure I am that LUCKY GIRL in his eye...
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 2:24:00 AM

    hehe this is sweet

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/3/2012 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Haha!! Thank You Ahsan
  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:37:00 PM

    this is so sweet

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/3/2012 2:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Linda
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 2:39:00 PM

    ‡ Makes Me Think Of The Movie, The Terminator,' With Kyle's One And Only Photo Of His Heart's Love, Sarah, Throughout Shiftings Time, Sweet Beautiful Carmen. Always Pulling It Out To Gaze Upon Her, Yet, Never Truly Knowing Perhaps As Unto Why ? But John Conner Knew, That His Father As His Mother Were Destined, To Help Change The Course Amid The Afore Mentioned, Time ? Written In The Stars, These Parallels That We Are ˜ Quite Beautiful Your Poe And Your Smile! Thank You For Your Beauty's Kind Visit. 'Happy Holidays.' Love Always, Me *

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/1/2012 3:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Love the imagery here of your kind words, I love that movie, it's a classic of true love. Love always Carma
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 2:10:00 PM

    Carma, are you giving somebody the eye? Lol. Nice one. Love ya, Toquyen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/1/2012 3:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Toquyen ,LOL u found me out lol
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:58:00 PM

    Very nice Haiku Carma... :o)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/1/2012 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you much my dear friend Dan, enjoy ur stuff too!! Xoxo Carma
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:32:00 PM

    Really good Carma, great imagery. Rollo

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/1/2012 7:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks much Rollo, hope the image was great lol
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:05:00 PM

    It was tricked ..... I had done the same thing ... lol ... Very good haiku Carma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 12/1/2012 7:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    A fates twist... Lol thank you much Anna-Lise enjoyed yours as well, smile big, :) have a wonderful Saturday xoxo Carma