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And he started caressing


And he started caressing her face
Between her two brows his fingers stopped momentarily
Causing her to open her dreamy eyes questionably
Demanding more tip-toeing of his fingers downwards
Eventually his fingers stopped at the softness of her lips.

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  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:06:00 PM

    WOW! This is awesome! :) It caught me by surprise!

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 9:46:00 AM

    mmmmm..........nice!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:01:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Cash. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 9:51:00 AM

    Sensual and so romantic..bravo

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:29:00 PM

    KASH.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:33:00 PM

    Intimace the main ingredent.

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:28:00 PM

    the words are so warm, to bring on the storm, when the heart melts, and building the steam...love it mate

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:42:00 AM

    congrats on a great win kash

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:09:00 AM

    oh I am all tingly now Kash reading this romantic interlude piece .. nice to know I can still blush at beautiful words of love ..luv..

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:22:00 PM

    ok, I see now. You must have entered her contest right as it was closing. Lucky you to get it in right on time!! soupmail

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:16:00 PM

    I am looking down and seeing lovely and romantic in the other comments!!! also I am seeing this won a contest. Which one??? Congratulations, Kash.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:14:00 PM

    this is SO lovely. So romantic. You are not the usual male author of love poems. You understand the romantic woman, Kash.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:08:00 PM

    This is really lovely kash, I love the romanticism which create tenderly within abc verses :D, and thank you for your comment in my page, it is really uplifting :D - hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 3:35:00 PM

    Lovely and romantic write,Kash..Congrats on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:06:00 PM

    you said it Dada, leaving us to our imagination...congrads on your win.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:25:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your winning place Kash xx

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 6:56:00 AM

    It took me a moment to realize that u wrote in A B C form...very strong work from the romantic writer in you...Congrats on painting the perfect prelude to a kiss...

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 4:49:00 AM

    Congrats Kash on your win with this very romantic write!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 7:44:00 PM

    And sensual I might add, enjoyed your poem Kash, Rose xxx

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:40:00 PM

    very very lovely!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:23:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 3:55:00 PM

    Now here is a gentleman, someone who can woo in word and deed..and present the scene in language all can enjoy. Please do enter my next 6 line contest...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:37:00 PM

    This is quite the sensual write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and wondrous poem this afternoon! What a powerfully romantic and passionate piece, Great Work!!