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Pensee


Knowledge palace
Filled with future fantasies
Diving in new and new vocabularies
Fast door of success
Wonderful school!

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:18:00 AM

    This is really clever...I write a lot of cinquains, too. But, I use the traditional syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. I've never tried this type. I'll have to give it a go..Hugs, Holly Moore

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:59:00 AM

    hahahahahahahahahaha... wow! short but wonderful... "knowledge palace filled with future fantasies" Graduation gown filled with present realities... lol... Nice piece Janet. Love ... Angel

    muthoni Avatar janet muthoni Date: 12/2/2012 4:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanx simon for your encouragement.....