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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/8/2012 7:29:00 AM
This is erie, I wrote a poem(not posted on this site) about a year ago on this same Topic. My one line was that "I threw away that old pride, I never wore it well." I really like this poem and your choice of changes.
Joe Inca
Date: 12/4/2012 2:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this perfectly flowing bundle of good advice and wisdom thanks for sharing
Ahsan Khalid
Date: 12/3/2012 12:15:00 AM
Smoothly exicuted well written!
Phyllis Babcock
Date: 12/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
I think no I know I need to do a lot of house cleaning in my life. This is going to my fav. An awesome write with good advice. love phyl
Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/2/2012 12:30:00 AM
This is a remarkable piece it would do everyone some good to read this. Well done.
Linda-Marie SweetHeart
Date: 12/1/2012 6:18:00 AM
a wonderful write expressing the relationship between clean hearts and God Mystic Rose. valuable piece luv
DON JOHNSON
Date: 11/30/2012 8:54:00 PM
yes great poetry here, love it babe...
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/30/2012 2:39:00 PM
Nice to read your verse today! I have always thought it true cleanliness is next to Godliness! Light & Love
Ralph Mason
Date: 11/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
My Rose that is a wonderful poem. Great job. Warm thoughts, Ralph
Dustin Self
Date: 11/30/2012 1:47:00 PM
Great poem! I need to do that myself. Good job!
Jack Ellison
Date: 11/30/2012 9:57:00 AM
Very uplifting write, my friend! Kudos... welcome to P-Soup! Cheers, Jack
Michael J. Falotico
Date: 11/30/2012 7:23:00 AM
Love the concept of this piece.. your have written it so well... Michael