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  1. Date: 4/26/2013 1:12:00 AM
    Andrea, you are on the right track. It is not about a white woman/black relationship. It is a sad tale of a loving lady who finds herself in a fix because the man can no longer play ball, among other challenges the wife has to contend with.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 5:41:00 PM
    I am trying to understand this one. For me, it is a conflict between a man and a woman. did Victoria get it right saying it was white woman/black man? I also enjoyed that joke at the end!

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 7:09:00 PM
    as a former resident of Kenya, I can understand this piece. White women, black men...there is a wonder and a danger to it...well done..interesting that you add the 'joke' at the end

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    Date: 4/26/2013 1:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Victoria, thank you so much for reading and commenting on this piece. Kindly shed light on the wonder and danger to it? I am a bit lost?