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Feel Me

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Feel Me

Can you feel me?
Touch me
Can you feel me now?
It's my soul
Slipping away
Slowly, softly
Like a snake I slither
Into the depths of hell
Touch me
One last time
Can you feel me?

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:23:00 PM
    Wow the imagery of this poem is amazing! I feel your sense of aching for understanding. I look forward to reading more:) thank you for sharing!!!