Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 
About This Poem

The Beautiful Melt

All those sentimental Christmas songs with romantic pretty lines like "Walking in a Winter Wonderland" or "As Long as you love me so, let it snow let it snow, let it snow" - I'd love to take the feeling of nostalgia each lovely phrase invokes and wrap it around me like a warm woolen cloak. But words do not suffice, and imagination, no matter how sweet, will not see me through a long cold winter's night. I look up at a sky ablaze with stars. They cannot match the light within your shining eyes. I want to BE with you, snuggled by a fire, the steady glow of your adoring eyes on mine; the touch of your fingers on my face; and the touch of my own fingers, trembling, as I trace your smile before you lean in for the softest, smoothest kiss. Oh, for the beautiful melt of the season as the warmth of REAL sensations soak into my skin. No, a mere fond memory simply cannot do! Written Nov. 28, 2012 for the Fond Memories Poetry Contest of Craig Cornish

Please Login to post a comment
Next>|Last
 
  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:59:00 PM

    Andrea , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for everything...pd

  1. Date: 12/16/2012 1:01:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading this one again. Thanks so much for the time you took to read my poems. I greatly appreciate the time and comments. Have a wonderful Christmas Andrea.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 11:27:00 PM

    So very romantic. Wonderful write. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 10:58:00 AM

    outstanding poem my friend Andrea...super like it!! congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:46:00 PM

    Hmmmm a sexy hot write Andrea. Congrats on your win with this gem. love phyl

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:25:00 AM

    Andrea, congrats on your well deserved win in Craig's contest today. Love, Gail

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:18:00 AM

    Love the romantic twist Andrea and especially the melting!!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:47:00 AM

    congrats Andrea on an outstanding write and exciting win for fond memories .. this is exceptional luv ..

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 6:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your big win in this contest,Andrea....Lovely write,friend...

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:49:00 AM

    Big Congratulations Andy love, would have placed it higher sweetie xx

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:45:00 PM

    Big congratulations!!! The title is absolutely perfect, and the poem itself gave me the warm fuzzies :)

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:59:00 PM

    Andrea,, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ON YOUR XOOL WINNING POEM~LINDA

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:33:00 PM

    So nice to still feel this way about your husband..one lucky woman! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:56:00 PM

    congrats on a great win Andrea

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 5:53:00 AM

    Fantastic write! Really love this. I am having a wonderful time reading through some of your poems; indeed you are a rare talent!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:14:00 PM

    Nice twist on this contest theme...lovey dovey and dreamy!! Does Joe know about this one?...Wakka wakka wakka! hahah...I like it a lot! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 4:20:00 PM

    Andrea, In my country there is no snow, since I was child It was always be my dream to enjoy snow amid The Chirstmas, sitting behind the window with a glass of hot chocolate, but through your verses, I sense it now :). PS: I love to enjoy Christmas song too, it made me sink into the beauty of Christmas :D

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 3:07:00 PM

    Very romantic images, I hope he makes it home for your Christmas.

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:24:00 AM

    Cozy fireside stuff with warm blanket, companion and wine, a lovely decorated tree looking on. Loved it. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 9:10:00 AM

    The depth of your poem carries on the REALITY, sweet but sour like if truth is not there. Lovely expressed, loved always, my friend, bl

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:16:00 AM

    a beautiful romantic write Andrea.i almost melted away...sgh..you show us dreams...and now my whole day will go dreaming merrily..

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:15:00 AM

    congrads Andrea,..you are the no. one poet now..according to the placements..just saw you name ahead of Carrie's ...way to go gal..

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:17:00 PM

    loving the romance in this one, andrea! love the title too, good luck in the contest :-)

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 10:17:00 AM

    just love this tender write too, my friend

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 2:03:00 PM

    I can see steam Andrea..." do you know What you're doing here..?? If you Continue on like this I'll have to raise my computer insurance..!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 1:10:00 PM

    nice piece Andrea... You are in for it... I was just wondering what state of emotion you are, and how curious you are to see your addresee since memory has failed to unite you. Love... Angel

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:51:00 AM

    Answered your comment on my clerihew poem page, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 10:14:00 AM

    Such a passionate and romantic poem here from you Andrea.Love this very much!

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:02:00 AM

    Yes you can combine forms to make the 6 lines HUGS! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 6:43:00 AM

    This is another extremely impressive poem by my great favorite poet and friend! A winning piece as always! Good luck and best wishes again my dear Andrea. love always, Leonora

Next>|Last