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questionku

touch dry lips
wine glass nearly full
ring A A. tomorrow?

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  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:07:00 PM

    Congrats on your awesome write and win! Hugs

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/13/2012 8:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Cecila..........Seren
  1. Date: 12/13/2012 8:20:00 AM

    Many congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Seren! love and hugs, Leonora

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/13/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Leonora....Seren
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:43:00 PM

    LOL, Love your HAIKU. And Congratulations on a well deserved win.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/13/2012 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Jon for the congrats...Seren
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:19:00 PM

    Oh, go ahead have a drink. :) That'd be the little red devil on your right shoulder. :) Congrats on your #1 placing.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/12/2012 4:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol thank you Robert, I dont really drink much honestly... Seren
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:55:00 AM

    Congratulations! Very cute poem :D

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/12/2012 9:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Rebecca ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:26:00 PM

    way to go, Seren, at the TOP!!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 3:30:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yipee yeaa, what a surprise Andrea...Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 5:18:00 AM

    congrats on a great win Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 7:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Joseph....Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:57:00 AM

    Congrats on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 7:43:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Many thanks Modgupe.....Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:34:00 AM

    Big congrats on top spot sass you done well girl xx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow High 5s Mandy. Lol I am a bit overwhelmed with this win...Seren
  1. Date: 12/11/2012 1:14:00 AM

    Nicely done Seren! Congrats on your win!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Vicky...Seren
  1. Date: 12/10/2012 10:19:00 PM

    One of the first and best entries, well done! Thanks for playing.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/11/2012 1:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard, I am gobsmacked...Seren
  1. Date: 12/6/2012 7:30:00 AM

    This is an awesome ku! Great job :)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/6/2012 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Heather, thanks for stopping by and commenting....Seren
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:56:00 PM

    Dear Seren, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Welcome to the SOUP Family. Any Friend of Bill is a Friend of mine Nice Pen. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious comment on my blog muchly appreciated LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/4/2012 12:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Harry, ...Seren
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 6:10:00 AM

    hey Seren this is awesome, you certainly pick up quick.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/3/2012 8:42:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Harry, must be the wine lol...Seren
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 8:40:00 AM

    I did one last night, Seren. If i have time, I will post it soon. Right now I am scurrying so I can get off and go to kick boxing class!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/1/2012 1:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Cant wait to read it Andrea. I used to take Judo. good exercise. thanks for calling in... Seren
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:40:00 AM

    Lol:-) No,at least wait til after the weekend before making any calls to AA..haha:) What a lovely and original questionku you have written,Seren

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 12/1/2012 1:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    does it stand for Arild Always. thanks for your comment. Seren
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 10:17:00 PM

    Seren this is correct based on the parameters I provided. This is not a traditional haiku. Well done on first attempt

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/30/2012 11:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard, i dont know enough to be able to argue my corner. ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 2:49:00 PM

    try to connect 2 of the lines...[my dry lips /touch the full wine glass -- phone in hand] if you drank your lips would be wet so why is the glass nearly full? why tell us that...you have a good strong image here...what made it a special moment for you? Light & Love

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/30/2012 3:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    maybe because I hadnt poured it to the top, because I ummmmm had a drinks problem lol i cant copy what you wrote it wouldnt be fair. but i do see what you mean... Thank you Seren
  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:44:00 AM

    Ha i saw that glass, nearly full my eye, it was a stein glass lol . I might post your poem and show everyone what I have to put up with , the disrespect and lack of a pressy, and you drank all the wine too.........lol xx good Ku though

    Tams The Golden Girl Avatar Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/30/2012 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    don't tempt or dare me lolxx
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/30/2012 10:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hahaha Mandy as if you would do that. Thanks for the comment though...Seren
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 11:12:00 PM

    I hope there'd be no need to ring AA... but yes, this is a nice write, Seren...thank you for passing by my poems and I am glad to share our tradition here-- hold on to the wonderful memories and love from your father, I believe that can help...I am really sorry for your loss. Btw, I am glad to see that you have the tree sketch in your blog as well... thanks again, or as we say it here, "Salamat"

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/30/2012 12:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Nikko for stopping by, am a relative newbie here, enjoy writing poetry, some are good some passable, but thats how life is, isnt it. No A A doesnt need a call lol. ....Seren
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:10:00 PM

    I sure enjoy seeing this new little creation of yours called questionku. This one is particularly clever.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 11/29/2012 5:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Andrea, as usual I didnt have a clue what I was doing........Seren