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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 12:19:00 PM
    I like this one simply because I am a fan of the hummers..Your work is well put together..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you got a chuckle..Yes, my keyboard portrait does resemble Dagwood somewhat..I drew that one the board when I was in college before the teacher came into the room..That is the Plan Ahead Thnk and the teacher was laughing as he erased my design..I did it before class while the teacher was out of the room..I was getting close.Sara

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    Date: 11/29/2012 12:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    to fourty years old when I did that.Silly immature me.Ha!!Sara
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:03:00 AM
    Nice subject. Excellent meter and rhyme in the style I like. Great choice of word pairings.

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:24:00 AM
    Have you ever seen the bumble bee hummingbird, it is spectacular I had forgotten about it until I read this . Thanks xx

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:56:00 PM
    I like it, Jon. Hummingbirds are so cute with their long beaks. They dart around like little bees. I love watching them. So tiny little things. You did good. Love ya, Toquyen

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 11:41:00 PM
    he flew right into my bedroom! great the 'atmospheric seas'