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  1. Date: 1/17/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Best I've seen in a while, John. Love the creative form and the imagery. Cheers, Roy

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 6:36:00 PM

    I read your work, John, and I am struck with the mediocrity of my poems. I never venture far from the standard rhythm and rhyme forms... and then don't even get it right. I tip my hat to you, my poet friend. Very well done...... Jake

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:36:00 PM

    Perhaps the mystery is you John, so much to know, this enigmatic figure that haunts both dreams and nightmares. Teasing with what is and what might never be; what an enigma to drift with! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 12:35:00 AM

    Lave this poem very much. Well written Best wishes, Larisa

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:55:00 AM

    John, what a creative and wonderful write, very well done. Constance

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 11:10:00 AM

    AMAZING! A definately brilliant and well thought out piece! This one held me positively enthralled... You have quite a talent... again...A.M.A.Z.I.N.G... I would call this World Class writting.

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

    I am left mesmerized and still not fully sure to what the final answer is. This is nothing short of brilliant John!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:13:00 PM

    Great description of a love affair..Some can be right and some can be wrong..Enjoyed reading your very creative work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:05:00 PM

    This is really great! It's so strong...Man,I had to go back and read it over again before I finished writing this comment.Wow! That is really someting...

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:31:00 AM

    You're AWESOME! Both of you. Great write. Warm thoughts, Ralph

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 1:28:00 AM

    Wow , this is so good will read it again when I have absorbed this. super write xx