Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
Comments Inbox

 

Not Too Late

                                            Wednesday afternoon
                                            Blue fruits from the trial
                                          Smacks and hacks for sure
                                          Learning do from failure
                                         Learn from yesterday,live today,hope for tomorrow

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:01:00 PM

    I like the last line, Janet...good job! Hugs, Holly

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 5:06:00 PM

    Nice life lessons Janet, I enjoyed your tanka this morning:) and thank you for visiting my page, it's been a pleasure :D- hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 8:58:00 AM

    Great work Janet! bravo.. Love... Angel

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 10:03:00 AM

    Words of wisdom Janet, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    muthoni Avatar janet muthoni Date: 11/30/2012 6:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks Lise
  1. Date: 11/28/2012 8:09:00 AM

    janet there is always hope..David

    muthoni Avatar janet muthoni Date: 11/28/2012 8:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    definitely