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Holding on

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Below is the poem entitled Holding on which was written by poet ANDREA TRAVIS. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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Holding on

holding on, with a long tight string

holding on, as if we are connected

holding on, trying to pull me closer

holding on, starting to smother me

holding on, to what you think i am

holding on, to an impossible dream

holding on, saying you love me

holding on, but never knowing me

holding on, please stop

i can hold you out.

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  1. Date: 11/28/2012 1:44:00 AM
    Andrea I love the strong message in this....David