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UNDER THE BARE SOLES

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UNDER THE BARE SOLES

whether you'll write just one address
on the road never guessed. When would it
raises sharp pointed exactly
on bare soles

this was still yesterday
we stand in the midst of the fire
you ignite. Your anger
so that wouldn't leave the rest
when the morning we completed

let's play at the end of the ragged
childhood. Running into the sky cracks

and this mouth you brought
couldn't told a thing as a mark
it should
has removed
when we were stuck in the road number
that never was

let's make a night the orange
before you pull me from the calendar numbers
embark on a journey of the same
which always ends up being the carcass
in an ambush pointy under bare soles

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:57:00 AM
    Such maturity of write and thought SO pleased to read and enjoy your write! fav line [let's play at the end of the ragged childhood. Running into the sky cracks] Welcome to Poetry Soup, if you need any help or information it would be my pleasure to aid you. I am running a Contest now for 6 lines of verse on the topic light..please do enter. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:56:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Yunizar. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:12:00 PM
    Interesting work that you have penned..Sara

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    Date: 11/28/2012 9:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks, Sara