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Under the rain

After the night the boy
Drain all of his blood,
Then ran into the rain
Which very sharp in skin

When the body deflating
There is a hunk of wind in his hand 
Vitrified

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  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:07:00 AM

    Good imagery welcome to the soup!!! :))

    nassyam Avatar yunizar nassyam Date: 2/6/2013 11:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Edward
  1. Date: 12/3/2012 7:03:00 AM

    hi Yunizar...its so nice to read your great share,..welcoming you in the soup... hope to read more of your great writes..salam kenal...SK:)

    nassyam Avatar yunizar nassyam Date: 2/6/2013 12:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Sukma. salam kenal...