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About This Poem

Cold Comfort

I want so much total tail rhyme
if only to ring your cold chime,
desperate... I am for
in this troubled world i seek
someone i care for in the bleak
someone... someone like me.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

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  1. devnath Avatar
    bl devnath
    Date: 12/9/2012 10:29:00 AM
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    Classic one lies in real heart. Thanks of words I am not giving because I always feel words are not complete...., my sweet friend...............Thanks.....Loved always, bl
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    Yesha Shah
    Date: 12/1/2012 4:34:00 AM
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    Very well penned tail-rhyme and such truthful writing here. Good luck in the contest.
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    Leonora Galinta
    Date: 12/1/2012 2:38:00 AM
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    A unique tail-rhyme my dear friend which I enjoyreading this evening ! Excellent indeed! Good luck always! Thanks for your precious time stopping by to read and leave inspiring comments on my work! Have a nice day always! love/hugs,Leonora
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    Mohammad Yamin
    Date: 11/30/2012 1:05:00 PM
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    It is highly enjoyable to read your passionate and skillfully crafted poem. The concluding line is awesome. Thanks for visiting my Tanka Demands of Love and for your heart warming comments. Have a nice weekend. -Mohammad
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    Sara Kendrick
    Date: 11/30/2012 10:03:00 AM
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    This one has deep emotional worth..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..If we can make it through the bleak, we should make it in the sunshine..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
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    Linda-Marie SweetHeart
    Date: 11/29/2012 9:48:00 PM
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    this is a cool entry Harry luv .. much luck ..luv the title .. sets the tone ..
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    HOLLY MOORE
    Date: 11/29/2012 7:18:00 PM
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    This is straight from the heart..how it should be! Thanks for such a nice comment on my page..Hugs, Holly Moore
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    Michael J. Falotico
    Date: 11/29/2012 2:25:00 PM
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    Your an original Harry... Love your flow in this one.... Michael
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    Richard Lamoureux
    Date: 11/28/2012 6:11:00 PM
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    That is going to be hard Harry because you are one of a kind!
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    daver austin
    Date: 11/28/2012 2:20:00 PM
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    Outward looking and introspective at the same time. Good stuff. LOve, daver
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    robert johnson
    Date: 11/28/2012 1:00:00 PM
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    Between the lines upon the page. The truth is there from a wise sage. A heart that yearns for love to share. To raise two souls from lifes despair. Got it harry! Keep em' comin'.
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    Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
    Date: 11/28/2012 10:24:00 AM
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    Can only agree with the other comments harry xx
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    Owen Yeates
    Date: 11/28/2012 7:12:00 AM
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    Hi harry great write hit home my friend, all the best Owen
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 11/27/2012 1:50:00 PM
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    what a COOL title, cold comfort. LOVE that, Harry. and wanted to thank you for my 4th place win. was that your first contest ever? It was a great contest idea.
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 11/27/2012 12:36:00 PM
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    Well done Harry,powerful piece my friend.Take Care,Arild
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    Gail Angel Doyle
    Date: 11/27/2012 11:57:00 AM
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    I agree with David and Wilma; Wonderful poem Harry. Hugs, Gail
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    Wilma Neels
    Date: 11/27/2012 11:09:00 AM
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    Love the title and your write Harry especially the ending so perfect. I gotta agree with David :) love Wilma
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    David Williams
    Date: 11/27/2012 9:59:00 AM
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    Harry, this is a very strong write, it resonates around your head, well done....David


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