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  1. Date: 2/18/2013 11:37:00 AM
    Ok, I guess I'm way off base after reading many of the other comments, but I thought this was a bit of dark humor about a succling baby and the time it takes from you and your bride....of course, I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed.

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 9:15:00 PM
    you are the poet of every season....great write David !

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:17:00 AM
    Very powerful and passionate poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 9:34:00 PM
    Bro, a compelling and passionate write, I want you in my corner always! Hugs

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:39:00 AM
    Oh David this is such a great poem. So much weight in each and every word. Hugs - shaz x

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 7:00:00 PM
    Very powerful write here David,flows so well..

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:18:00 AM
    powerful poem here, David, really like this....

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 3:02:00 PM
    David, is this an extended metaphor? I once wrote something similar to this but of course the topic was not as serious. Good and heartfelt.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 1:59:00 PM
    give it to em Dave ol mate, and toss em clear over the gate, :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:27:00 AM

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 4:20:00 AM
    big up David! awesome!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:39:00 AM
    Creative write-up there David, well done. Hope to read more.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 2:19:00 AM
    Lovely one David, to keep fighting is tiring i know, but look for the light at the end of the tunnel....Seren

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:41:00 PM
    Wow there is a lot going on here. Messages beneath messages. Well done.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 2:16:00 PM
    powerful and heartfelt write, my friend. Hope you are both doing well : )

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:39:00 AM
    I love this poem! Very creative indeed! Oh, and in response to your comment, yes, I actually am only 12. I write mainly humorous, rhyming poetry, but sometimes I'll be sorrow when I'm gloomy. And I may only be 12, but I'm very mature and responsible.

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:28:00 AM
    David, sometimes the head on approach works perfectly. Making him aware of you knowing about his games and telling him you are ready for it. A powerful write my friend. Was good to come across you today. Hope your week will be a blessed one ;)

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 11:01:00 AM
    What a powerful and intriguing write my friend! You have masterfully projected pain and it is quite painful indeed! I hope all is going better with your wife David, but i know you are struggling, you are in my prayers! What a significant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Hi David another great write love it my friend hope you are ok, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:22:00 AM
    Having traveled on your poetic flight, I'm delighted. Nice one David!