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The New Moon Prophecy

In orbit around a distant sphere
An unknown moon will soon appear
Lined with streaks of blue

The warmth of friction,a blanket of gas
Will cling to the surface, held tight by its mass
All we thought we knew

Will be consumed by what is known
The Joyous truth, we're not alone
Time will come to tell

No diplomat will need be sent
To its home bye the geological vent
They'll have but one cell

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  1. Date: 1/26/2013 10:16:00 AM

    Ouch, makes me think of a movie I'd watched on the TV.:( I hadn't seen the first few minutes so I'm not SURE of the title, though subjectwise this comes very close, Joe. This is making me think of the "mayan calendar", maybe someone hadn't been so clever at doing the math? Regardless, this is a cleverly contrived write, by my so very intelligent and modest friend! Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:08:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Joe. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 9:33:00 AM

    Congrats on your great win...Sara

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 1:06:00 AM

    Thank you, for commenting on my poem. I had to read this one at this very moment...Because Apocolyps Prophecy is on my TV right now! Wild! Very nice write. :o)

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:11:00 PM

    Just the mere scientific tho't behind this tail-rhyme is strong...very well constructed entry. Scientific themes are greatly enjoyed here!! gwendolen

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:03:00 PM

    Joe., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:44:00 PM

    Congratulations Joe xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:40:00 AM

    Amazing piece of work, you have put a lot of thought into this one. I am not sure if all have grasped the intricacy of thought you have here. Well done!