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My Mind

I never found anyone to share my life with
but my life goes on
forever in the sun
my blankets take me to sleep
and I dream of you almost constantly

my mind is not like yours
is it as free
it is my mentality
that takes you away from me

when I wash up on the shore
will I ever find you
will I ever be renewed and reassured
by your everlasting voice
and will you go with me into the sunset

my mind is not like yours 
is it as free
it is my mentality
that takes you away from me

you were in my dreams
you were a part of me
you were in my life
and saved me

I was floating in the ocean
with all of its waves throwing me back and forth
my head was barely above water
but my head was in the same world as yours
and you seem so reassured
I couldn’t think of anything to say to you

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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:43:00 PM

    Interesting comparison used..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks so much for stopping by..I like your computer generated drawings that you put in your comment..Sara

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:33:00 PM

    Hi Clay, This reads like a song, I like the chorus that keeps popping up. The dreams seem wonderful, sad that your brain takes you away.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:36:00 PM

    I loved it Clay! Beautifully written! :)