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  1. Date: 11/29/2012 4:43:00 PM
    Interesting comparison used..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks so much for stopping by..I like your computer generated drawings that you put in your comment..Sara

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:33:00 PM
    Hi Clay, This reads like a song, I like the chorus that keeps popping up. The dreams seem wonderful, sad that your brain takes you away.

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 8:36:00 PM
    I loved it Clay! Beautifully written! :)