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A Woman's Wrath

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A Woman's Wrath

During the dark dreary cold winter weather
There're times of sunshine and warm rather,
So also the moods of a woman you can't trust
Soft as snowflakes at times or cold hard crust.

Hotter than fire or colder than ice,
Happy or sad - Oh, you'll pay the price,
Placid or provoked, she carries a punch
Making the best of us a sore-looking bunch.

Never step out into this raging storm,
Crawl under the covers and stay warm,
Let the wailing winds pass you by,
Stay put until you see a clear blue sky!

You may censure me, you can ostracize;
Oh, do review thy lady ere you patronize -
Thus I forewarn the brethren of my ilk,
Fall not for fair face and skin soft as silk!


Abdul Malik
"Fire and Ice" Contest

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 5:56:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 1st place win Abdul.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 4:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win Abdul! love/hugs,LG

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your top spot Abdul, I feel honoured to share it with you, this one is superb xx

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 12/19/2012 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a bunch. You hit the spot too! Have a happy holiday.
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:32:00 AM
    Congratulations my friend Abdul on your fantastic win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 12/19/2012 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks. You too!
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:39:00 PM
    Abdul, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 7:14:00 PM
    Lol women get moody no wzy..... Haha. Seren

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 12/19/2012 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Julia Roberts! Thanks.
    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts
    Date: 12/18/2012 7:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sorty forgot to say congratulations.
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 4:35:00 PM
    This is an elegant poem on women and their moods. I am not moody at all, but I sure know some women who are! congrats on your fine win.

    Malik Avatar Abdul Malik
    Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    That's great! I thought if you have seen one, you've seen 'em all!! If you are NOT moody, then ... maybe, I need to write a poem on you alone!?
  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Abdul. Love, Carol