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Mother

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Mother

M-erely carried for nine months.
O-ffered me a chance of a lifetime to visit the world.
T-ook good care of me from a tiny to a whole being.
H-ermetically sealed me so as to exclude bad company.
E-nhanced me to an innovative citizen in the society.
R-eady in trust to release me to the trials of the world.

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  1. Date: 12/9/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Hi Janet! This is really very good! I like the way you express each letter with such a vivid sentence. However, this is actually an acrostic poem. Just a thought....Great job and thanks for your comments on my page...Love, Holly

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:50:00 PM
    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:49:00 PM
    Wow, this poem is spectacular, by far one of my favorites I have ever read (and I'm not just saying that). Is it published or what? It's really good, and you are extremely talented... I've read some of your other poems as well. You should visit my site: poeticpossibilities.tk ! I think this poem could have a really good chance of winning one of our contests! Wish you the best with your poetry and I hope you get published! : )Jacob Cramer