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Misery

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Below is the poem entitled Misery which was written by poet Charles Jefferson. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Misery

Meet me at the end
Inside the fire we'll begin
See what you've done to these men
Even Ive had enough of this
Realize that you have sinned
You will burn in your insolence

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  1. Date: 12/29/2012 11:27:00 AM

    IT'S GOOD.

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 1:56:00 AM

    this is very good, like it...

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:51:00 PM

    Hi Jeff you are not reading my haiku wrong, originally when English speakers first started trying to write haiku they equated a syllable to a 'sound' the japanese have a tonal language and they do not equate, the more current thought is 17 syllables OR less..most try for 14..short long short is most common, a 2 part structure with a season word. Hope that helps nice to meet you. PS 5/7/5 would not be considered wrong simply old school the content is more important. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:08:00 PM

    Charles hard hittng...David

    Jefferson Avatar Charles Jefferson Date: 11/26/2012 2:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Appreciat the feedback.