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                          I'll be the last to see your guise
                          a reason to love and be wise
                          slow on the uptake... slow
                          I'll ignore excuses, delays
                          your lost smile and your silent gaze
                          I'll never know, never know




Obviously fictitious! : )

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  1. Date: 2/14/2013 5:10:00 PM

    Are women really that mysterious Ruben? I agree we are hard to know at times because what we say may not be what we mean. Tough situation to deal with.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:04:00 AM

    Congratulations on your super win in Susan's "Tail Rhyme" contest Ruben. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 10:18:00 AM

    Ruben, Congrats on your great win..Enjoyed reading the second time around..Sara

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 5:00:00 PM

    Ruben., ;-) congratulations in Susan's "Favorite tail rhyme, past or present contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 2:34:00 PM

    Like this one Ruben, Congrats on your well deserved win in Susan’s contest!

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 1:37:00 PM

    Congratulations Ruben , nice xx

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:38:00 AM

    congrats Ruben on this deep emotional write and exciting win luv .. reading between the lines my friend .. some things r best left unknown ..

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 8:06:00 AM

    Well done Reuben, congrats on win.

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Very nice Tail rhyme here Ruben!Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 10:19:00 AM

    Line 4 still is not hanging together with the concepts in the poem..you'll wipe? why would you wipe an excuse..wipe-away?[ I'll wipe from my memory your excuses, and delays] ..I paying close attention to you poet! ;) L & L

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 11/28/2012 11:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, the idea was wipe away; I took the conjunction "and" and replaced it for "ignore." I want to make you happy! : D Thank you for your help!
  1. Date: 11/27/2012 10:44:00 AM

    I don't believe you Ruben, this is too convincing :) just kidding! I enjoyed this tonight. how are you doing?

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:56:00 AM

    Obviously....Enjoyed reading your tail rhyme..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..May your gift expand in the days ahead and throughout the New Year touching on the lives of many in a positive way..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:23:00 AM

    Very nice Ruben is it for a contest if so, it has winner scribbled through it xxxx

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 7:17:00 AM

    hey this is awesome Ruben. i'm a bit the same way,, wow i'm not alone...

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:48:00 AM

    to love and be wise..so hard to have them both... I like your obviously fictious post Ruben..

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 7:51:00 PM

    Ruben, ... charming,,, but I think you will see more than a standing guise.. you come with a city of your own... xox~pd

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 7:51:00 PM

    never say never...

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:54:00 PM

    Nawww I don't believe it ..it's rea [lI'll be the last to see your guise/ without questions you've improvised/ my time will pass in years too slow/ Was it your smile, those delays and excuses, I'll never know your silent gaze/ I'll never know, never know....

    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 11/26/2012 5:54:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Believe me, Im one of those who would certainly claim: "temporary insanity." : )
    O. Avatar Ruben O. Date: 11/26/2012 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I changed the 2nd, 3rd, 4th, and 5th lines! : )
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:21:00 PM

    I really like the sound of this one Ruben. Is it for susan's contest? tail rhymes are pretty cool but VeRY hard to write!! My favorite part was where you ended , I'll never know, never know.