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CARMA'S Tale

1. Wise owl seeks,
Ears perk, squirrel 
opens, Eye.

2. A  perched nest,
Eggs lay, hatched
Taking place, in,
Front and centers,
Row,Chasing hens,
Birth.



3. A Snail, Slowly, 
delivers,Race to his,
foolish ways, crashing,
Cars darkness knee's

4. says the snake, rattles, 
Tail, quivering, sheets,
Behind A crows black,
Coat.

5. We all gathered,
Feathers, building,
Trees of fruit,Along,
The fences,of A shiny
Red Apple....

By Carma Reed
11-25-12



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  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:57:00 PM

    Carma, haikus or not, they are just nice to read!! Jag

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 7:50:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks much Jag
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 3:10:00 PM

    I don't think all of these are true haiku by the definition I learned for haiku, but they stand as sweet poems of reflective thoughts of inspiration, Carma.

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/26/2012 3:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the advice Andrea,and I will check into it and fix my pen,and get back to you, Xoxo Carma
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:54:00 AM

    Carma I agree wholeheartedly...David

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You David
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:14:00 AM

    Hi Carma fantatic words my friend, all the best Owen

    Reed Avatar Carma Reed Date: 11/27/2012 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank You Owen