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Want you

 My eyes burn as i look at you
 with your snake tattoo, blue jeans, 
 you make my heart thump
 a piece of me wants you to be mine
 As i put on my sun dress, i feel your eyes all over me
 like a bee to the honey, your sticky sweet
 all over me i know thats where you want to be
 A drunk love baby it's just you & me
 Whispers soft off the bitterness of your tounge
 your words are sharp, baby your breaking my heart
 A theif, a liar i can't live without you, 
 I just forever want you, want you, want you....

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  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:54:00 AM

    ‡ 'Like A Bee To Honey, Your Sticky Sweet.' Hot Hot Hot. Diggin The Passion Diggin The Desire Diggin The Love, Sweet Beautiful Kerry ˜ Passion Is The Dew As Love Is The Flower, And Your Poem Is Quite Beautiful! 'Happy Holidays & I Shall Favour This Treasure. My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 11:50:00 PM

    It reads like you have a crush on somebody? Ha,ha. Nice write.

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 3:38:00 PM

    Tender piece on desire and wanting.. hugs form Santa Michael

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 2:32:00 AM

    it was a good flicker i like it

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 10:05:00 AM

    A blue - jeaned baby doll - something to think about. Nice work Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 4:10:00 PM

    A good and lovely poem Kerry. - Wishing you a relaxing weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 6:40:00 AM

    very provocative peace nice poem thankyou for comments on mine xx davidscott