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Mother

As I sit I contemplate the hours I spend alone,
Never complaining, never crying.
You used to love me ,want me, need me,
Until it happened.
Now I sit and contemplate the hours I spend alone.

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  1. Date: 12/7/2012 6:07:00 AM

    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Lola. Love Carol

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 6:38:00 PM

    Lola.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD

  1. Date: 12/1/2012 5:33:00 PM

    I really like this one. Congrats on your HM with it.

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 12/1/2012 6:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks very much. Lola.
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 3:09:00 PM

    Thanks so much for this fine entry..it made me miss my Mom! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 12/1/2012 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for welcoming me to PoetrySoup and inviting me to enter your contest. Also thanks for my HM. I am enjoying writing poetry and I am very pleased I found PoetrySoup. Lola.
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 7:35:00 AM

    Big congratulations on your HM Lola xx

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 12/1/2012 6:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you. Lola.
  1. Date: 12/1/2012 12:25:00 AM

    Congrats. Lola ......Seren

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 5:29:00 PM

    Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    barron Avatar lola barron Date: 12/1/2012 6:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much. Lola.
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 4:00:00 PM

    The sadness is obvious in this write Lola. Welcome to the soup you have made a wonderful start xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 2:03:00 PM

    This write would be a good contest entry for my % line contest, please do enter. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:30:00 AM

    hi Lola welcome to the soup this sounds like you have lost your mum and for that I am sorry if it is so, but lovely words of truth here, all the best Owen