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Alice Through the Mirror

So idyllic, so virginal clean,
Gliding through life, blissfully pristine.
Existing in a queen of heart's palace
Oblivious of living the life of Alice.

 

Proper adjectives obstruct the throat,
Going through life like a sacrificial goat.
Forbidding reality to rain on a tea party
A white rabbit scolds when you're a bit tardy

 

Wanting acceptance as we all do,
Just better than most, hiding what eats through.
Pointing the finger at the mirror's reflection,
It's your own gazing back, with judgmental rejection.

 

A quicksilver sheen won't hide the naked truth,
Naivety lost somewhere in early youth.
Wear that mask with confident pride,
It just can't disguise the ugliness inside.

 

Paint a Cheshire smile on a transparent face,
Madness always looks better with a smirk in place.
Perilously falling through life's foggy mirror,
No guarantees, it will get any damned clearer.

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  1. Date: 5/10/2013 1:36:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Poetess D.

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 5:35:00 AM

    Congratulations on this whimsical write. Rick

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:07:00 PM

    Lisa, thank you for impressing me with your awesome poem. Congrats ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:36:00 PM

    ‡ But Upon A More Serious Note, I Really Diggg This Extremely Impressive, Well Written As Profound I May Say Verse. I Find More Then Just One Layer Unto Its Splendid Colours Also ? I Think I Am Going To Favour It. 'Totally Awesome!' And Thank You For Your Precious Kind Visit; Wonderful You Are. 'Happy Holidays.' My Love, Always, Rachel *

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:30:00 PM

    ‡ I Do Not Believe That I Ever Read Nor Viewed Through And Through The Fantasy Fairytale Whatever It May Be, Sweet Beautiful Lisa, Called 'Alice In Wonderland,' Yet I Do Know The Lyrics Unto Jefferson Airplanes & Grace Slicks, White Rabbit, Which Performs It Own Twist In Re Alice ? Which I Believe Also Your Lovely Beauty Has Thus Brushed Your Twist Upon ? This Sounds As Though A Jekyllia And Hyda Comverstaion In Which I Myself Have Etertained Many Of And Wow, She Never Shuts Up Sometimes, LOL. ˜

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 1:18:00 AM

    very poetic.