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The Charmer

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The Charmer

Charming a deadly poisonous snake
Is a hazardous occupation
For if a charmer makes one mistake
It's a striking attestation

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  1. Date: 11/27/2013 10:02:00 PM

    Jon Snake charmers are fun and mesmerizing to watch, but it's very scary and intense. Nice write my friend.

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/27/2013 10:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 9/13/2013 2:15:00 PM

    I really like this piece, and I love the brevity; it's concise and to the point. The only suggestions I have would be to smoothen it out a bit. I stumbled through your first line of rhyme; even though it's good and makes perfect sense, I think you could say the same thing but with different words, to iron out the wrinkles. I wish the last line had something about a bite or a strike ruining his concentration; that would have driven the whole thing home for me. Nonetheless, a clever write! Kudos!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 9/13/2013 7:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:17:00 PM

    Lol Jon i hate snakes but loved your poem....Seren

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 9:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Seren, How wonderful to see your lovely comments today. Thank you so much for visiting and reading my poems.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:51:00 PM

    Youre a funny guy Ha ha ha. I enjoyed this one, once I sunk my teeth into it. Nothing like the taste of cobra in the evening!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 7:29:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Richard, you are also a very funny and witty guy. Don't spice the meat up too much it could bite back.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 5:16:00 PM

    Indeed, a deadly poisonous snake usually had bright colored skin, but they are very beautiful, careful for your steps, otherwise they will ruin your holiday XD-Hug, Yanny

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I will indeed stay away from these deadly vipers for I am no charmer. But they are indeed beautiful sirens. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem Yanny. I hope you have a wonderful week.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:29:00 PM

    yes, it will! so much wisdom and humor in such a small package, but what a delight!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 7:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ilene. And what a delight it was for me to see that you visited my poem.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 4:05:00 PM

    Haha..Gave me a smile with 4 lines.Alright!

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 7:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Dan. Just a little poem with a bite.
  1. Date: 11/25/2012 3:29:00 PM

    Or it will ruin him. Will he be still alive? Lol. I can't see how he can be exempt while others wouldn't survive. Cute, John. Love ya, Toquyen

    Cavanaugh Avatar Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 4:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    LOL, You saw just where I was going with this. My original write for the last line was "It would be the end of his vocation" But I liked this version better. For me it was so much funnier.